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All Of Me?
Contributed by
Suz
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:27:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You will be willing to take all of me,
every last ripple, every last crease
When I lay with you on baby-soft grass under the moon
and we kiss
You will not be repulsed when I lace my legs in with yours
And you will not be afraid to stop looking into my eyes for a moment
So that you can hold my stomach away with one hand and
unbutton my size 15 Levis with the other
And you wont mind that it might be hard to reach because
my warm thighs smother your eager hands
even when I open to you
because you will let me and
you will not be repulsed by all of me
You will not be embarassed when the pants you bought to be extra baggy
do not have room for my hand to slip gracefully past the waist and down
You wont mind that instead I have to look away from you for a moment
to concentrate on your belt
And it wouldn't cross your mind to care that when you embrace me
you can't even touch your left hand to your right hand
And it will never bother you when you cannot find my jawbone
to follow
When you give me the delicate kisses that you know make me shiver
And you will love it when I shiver and you will not mind it when I ripple
You wont feel like tensing up when I am on top of you
or when I kiss you
Because you love,
...all of me?
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-03-05 16:27:55]
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Re: All Of Me?
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:36:08 PM AEST
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| I was over weight a long time. been on atkins diet now for a couple of months and it is working. ... getting to your poem.. your a great poet .. i like reading something i can understand and not have to think about it wondering what the poet is saying with big words.. i know how you feel about being overweight and being intimate with your loved one.. but let me tell you this.. IF HE DIDNT LOVE YOU HE WOULDNT BE THERE... oh so many times i have seen these beautiful skinny ladies in the magazine and he tells me that he dont like them...wow HE LOVES ME and i know i dont look like that and he says by saying that he dont like those women.. he likes me. the way i am.. and that feels good... GRAB HIM KISS HIM AND MAKE LOVE TO HIM.. ALL THAT MATTERS.. LOVE HIM AND LET HIM LOVE YOU... LET HIM.. CAUSE HE WANTS TO... sandy |
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Re: All Of Me?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:22:13 PM AEST
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Hi, Suz; If someone really loves you they are loving what is inside your mind, heart and soul, not the outside shell. Let him love the real you. Outer beauty fades, Inner beauty never does. At least you know he is not one of those shallow guys that only wants someone to pump up his ego because he feels lacking in himself. You are a lucky lady.
Rita |
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