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Tears I Cry
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:21:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears no more
I can not hide,
don't want to keep
them bottled up inside.
The longer I go,
these eyes swell more,
I can't go any further,
they start to pour.
Here I sit
falling apart,
my tears fall,
because of this lonely heart.
My heart is
breaking in two,
as my tears fall,
I'm crying for you.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.22/2003
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-03-05 17:21:15]
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Re: Tears I Cry
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:57:09 PM AEST
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very good! it is emotion. good wording, discribtive, and detailed. nice write!
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Re: Tears I Cry
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:29:56 PM AEST
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I sincerely hope this is just a poem. I hope there is no love problems in you life. Blessings to you.
hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Tears I Cry
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 09:19:05 PM AEST
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Cynthia, I'm so sorry you are so sad, I hope this isn't real, but if it is.....for you I feel!
Wipe your tears, and get really busy....that's always good if you want to start to forget, oh if he's just gone for a while...
Very sad, lamenting poem
well written!
love you
consue |
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Re: Tears I Cry
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by arden on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:34:51 PM AEST
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ohh this is so sad :(
really deep and full of emotion. loved this one.
Arden |
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