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go kissed away
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:35:14 PM in AEST
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We wander for distraction,
but we travel for fulfillment.
~Hilaire Belloc~
Webfairy
oh, i am just a dreamer, and you are but a dream
you are like a storm at sea, and i want to love you
but im getting blown away
oh, you are just a dreamer, and i am but your dream
a ghost within mystic shadows, daring midnight schemes
raging storm upon the ocean, you hear but cannot see
i would love to love you paramor, in your reality
distant shores of waking hours, dreamscapes seas we do gaze
you could have been anyone at all, upon azure oceans misty haze
white foam upon our ocean, waves rolling silently ashore
we hear musical melodies, from beneath its deepest floors
oh, whisper to me love, and then please take my hand
far from wakeful homelands, caressing slumbers creamy sands
we shall sail above the moon, butterfly kisses upon hearts this night
secret places only lovers know, love guiding our passions flight
oh, lovely dreamer, we are adrift upon sweet sea of dreams
loving you as you love me, whilst winds blow away stormy seas
past all land of waking shores, where birds sing everyday
until we close our eyes again, my love, go kissed away
oh, i am just a dreamer, and you are but a dream
you are like a storm at sea, and i want to love you
but im getting blown away
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Re: go kissed away
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:26:01 PM AEST
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Sad but awesome!
luv, huggs,
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Re: go kissed away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:46:19 PM AEST
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The images it brought to mind were absolutely magnificent. The feeling of the power of sensuality very seductive. Find something and hang on tight.
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Re: go kissed away
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by Kie on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:52:20 PM AEST
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This has a lyrical feel to it. It could be just me but while I was reading it I was imagining a latin male with a guitar and an incredible soft husky voice softly singing it to me.
*Gets back on track after hot flash*
You have a gift for weaving words that not only bring imagery to mind but also touch the heart.
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Re: go kissed away
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:23:12 AM AEST
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| Mmmm sensual, delicious ... and bittersweet ... love this poem Nessa ... hugs Jan |
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Re: go kissed away
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:49:58 AM AEST
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| Hmm- tantalizing erotic. Yet with a softness that compels one to dream with you.. Great work maam…Russ |
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Re: go kissed away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:44:02 PM AEST
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beautiful.
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Re: go kissed away
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by twinkletoes on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 07:36:18 PM AEST
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oh, i am just a dreamer, and you are but a dream
you are like a storm at sea, and i want to love you
but im getting blown away
Call me a crazy man but I read this and something was standing out like the dare I say it....:) the last words on each line of the above stanza.....DREAM, YOU, AWAY, was that mean't? If it wasn't it sort of falls into place very well. If it was your a genius!
A nice read nessa,
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Re: go kissed away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 07:42:19 PM AEST
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| hehe twinkletoes, yup yup guilty as charged lol, very clever, you, hardly anyone sees my lill things like that:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: go kissed away
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:18:52 AM AEST
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the illusive dream of love - tempestuous and seemingly out of reach - wonderful write, bittersweet - lovely metaphor.
daisies for my friend
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Re: go kissed away
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by venkat on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:11:24 AM AEST
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"far from wakeful homelands, caressing slumbers creamy sands we shall sail above the moon.... we are adrift upon sweet sea of dreams loving you as you love me, whilst winds blow away stormy seas"
..Each line is very rich..wonderful imagery wonderful flow..and feelings from heart..Great poem..venkat
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Re: go kissed away
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by faithmairee on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:46:59 PM AEST
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this is a great poem...so beautiful and a true delight to read...i loved it!
faith |
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Re: go kissed away
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 01:10:29 AM AEST
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| Simply magic........... |
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