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tale ageless as time
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:56:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
two fools on the sea,
of them what will be?
though cast to and fro,
within they both know,
hanging on to their oars,
of the one they adore,
they will fly with full sails,
and then they will bail,
love once a sweet memory,
as they drown in the sea,
as they laugh in the face,
of its watery embrace,
they float to the depths,
united in death,
into the abyss,
with one final kiss,
her eyes pled,"oh love!
save me, hold me tight!"
his eyes,"love, i'll kiss your
heart forever this night."
time was all they knew,
gentle sea breezes blew,
though a deeply blue love,
everlasting was their truelove,
heard calling each other on the bay,
the lovers only way,
two souls love had won,
like undying burning sun,
on ships this love was a sign,
heard from the shoreline,
they spend eternity together in love,
quietly soaring like doves,
in silent living oceans deep,
forever these two lovers sleep,
this tale of eternal love adored,
told on shores evermore,
two phantoms in the brine,
a tale ageless as time.
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ladyfawn
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:00:51 AM AEST
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Well, I am delighted you reposted so we could a read. You two did a most beautiful job. The tale may be timeless but so will this work be.
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:01:06 AM AEST
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| You two did a really nice job on this. I thought of the movie Titanic. That's what this write reminded me of. Great job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Kie on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:12:47 AM AEST
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| You two compliment each other like ebony and ivory do to my beloved piano. I never wanted to stop reading. Kie |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:14:58 AM AEST
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Very creative work of art.
Awesome!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:14:59 AM AEST
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Very creative work of art.
Awesome!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:17:42 AM AEST
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Awwww what a lovely piece of writing by two of my fav ppl... Great going you guys..... MORE...MORE!!!!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:22:19 AM AEST
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Really good poem. Well written, and it lets me see the sea, the winds lashing... everything.
Take care.
David |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:28:51 AM AEST
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Excellent! Too few poems are written in this poetic, almost mythical style these days. Much better than Titanic.
Keep it up, you guys!
Andrew |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:58:20 AM AEST
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| A bittersweet, yet beautiful poem written by two of my favourite people ... you compliment each other well ... hugs Jan |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by shelby on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:34:04 AM AEST
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wonder jon to the both of you this is perfect and you compliment one another terrific!
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 07:06:37 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful poem. Its wonderful that two of my favorite poets could write a poem together. Lovely, a treat for fans like myself. :) |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:16:58 AM AEST
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| Beautifully done. Romantically pleasing and inspiring.....Russ |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:16:19 PM AEST
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I immediatley thought of Titanic on this... couldn't help it... it just reminds me of that film...
great write... awesome!!! Keep up the good work u two!!! Loved it!!!
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 09:19:38 PM AEST
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| A beautiful romantic peice! Great job you both on this! Christina |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by arden on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:26:02 PM AEST
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i absolutely LOVE this!! wow its so good. wonderfully written. everything about it is just wow. nicely done.
Arden |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:40:56 PM AEST
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KINDA LIKE A MYSTERY OF WHO,WHAT,WHEN,WHERE,& WHY! IT HAD A GREAT FEEL TO IT,GREAT JOB!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by venkat on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:52:28 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of Titonic tale of love..venkat |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 07:18:06 AM AEST
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a beautiful tale told so well i could see the pictures inside my head as i read every word of your wonderful poem...excellent job...you are so good!
Faith |
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Re: tale ageless as time
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:24:27 PM AEST
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| You two write wonderfully together Nessa. Great job you two. *S* Cynthia |
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