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Can u console me
Contributed by
luckycharm
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:37:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No person can hurt me like u do,
Or say things to me like u do,
I see shadows of u everywhere,
See it just ain't fair,
That u couldn't tell me the truth,
I don't wan't to hear no more lies from u,
Our souls are connected like glue,
And then go away,
You broke my heart again,
My soul remains,
Just the way it is,
Can you console me
My heart feels like it stopped beating,
I'm just needing,
You but then again I don't,
Wan't u cause I won't,
Take this pain no more,
Boy just walk out the door,
Relationships come and go,
Sometimes they never last,
You try to look back in the past,
It stays just the way it is,
But can u console me
I sit here and watch rain,
Fall on my window pane,
I wish life will lead me,
To my destiny,
Your words hurt me,
Which makes u be,
That same person like before,
But this time you've changed,
I remain,
Just the way I am,
I got to let u go,
Cause u could never console me
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luckycharm
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2004-03-06 13:37:46]
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Re: Can u console me
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:48:37 PM AEST
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| This is a really good write, i hope the best for you! |
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Re: Can u console me
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by Kie on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:53:48 PM AEST
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| Lucky-This is my favorite by you. It was very well written, expressed deep sad emotion and I loved every word. Kie |
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