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suppressive letters
Contributed by
danimus
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Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hold in place, If feeling unbalanced
Stand by, Remain alert and demand
Independence, From everything
Having to see towns far in depression
Areas are boiling pots ready to explode
Locked up and jailed for manufactured aggressions
Living no life but its not what they chose
Make a point, If connections are unsure
Question why, Be stern and mention
Possibility, Before nothing
Haunted by the pressence of emptiness
While housed to settle in a silent hole
Hidden and digested with no prides left
It's been chained and banned meaning no control
Approach position, As a murderer to a victim
Argue reason, Reach full magnitude and view
Challenge, To prove
Haven't heard many disagreements
Since suppression of groups, Was mailed in envelopes
But its all been closed up with mistreatment
Hoping the weak liked what was wrote
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2004-03-06 14:47:55]
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Re: suppressive letters
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by poeticjustice101 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:39:24 PM AEST
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Re: suppressive letters
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:53:44 PM AEST
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i strongly disagree with the previous commentor, you have some deep and beautiful lines here:
"Having to see towns far in depression
Areas are boiling pots ready to explode
Locked up and jailed for manufactured aggressions"
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"Haunted by the pressence of emptiness
While housed to settle in a silent hole
Hidden and digested with no prides left"
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keep writing! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: suppressive letters
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 04:42:20 PM AEST
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This is a really great write, and isnt at all a bad poem despite what poeticjustice101 said. Its an intresting read, and I enjoy reading people's opinions on life, because thats what poetry mainly reflects.
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Re: suppressive letters
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by poeticjustice101 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 09:22:05 PM AEST
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| sorry about the last comment i posted, i was drunk |
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