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untitled
Contributed by
dark_poetry2404
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Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 09:06:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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paper flowers,
tear staind towers,
blood staind tears,
hopes and dreams now replaced by fears,
the wind wispers things to me,
the raindrops tell me a story,
i am defened by all the screaming,
i now know theres no hope in dreaming,
whenever i see my face,
i see a life that has been erased,
please i have to know if im still breathing,
oh please wont someone tell me,
am i suppose to be here,
why must there always be a tear,
does anyone here my call,
will anyone stop my fall,
can anyone stop all the pain i feel,
will someone do me a favor and myself they kill
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Re: untitled
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by poet_of_anger on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 09:10:14 PM AEST
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| Very well written, very nice, and very dark, good write. |
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Re: untitled
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by arden on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 09:49:32 PM AEST
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very dark and really good. i loved this. wonderful flow. good work keep it up.
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