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Blind Witness
Contributed by
EmersonV
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Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:19:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My flesh is crawling
Off my bones
My eyes are dripping
Tears of blood
Whats inside of me
That goes so wrong?
I was running blind
Trying to catch
Your hand
But my fate just
Found itself dead
And forgotten hanged.
My trust was blind
You broke the pact,
If gods my witness
God must be blind.
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EmersonV
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2004-03-07 02:19:06]
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Re: Blind Witness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:57:25 PM AEST
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"But my fate just
Found itself dead"
Interesting concepts used here, and you surreptitiously rhymed 'blind with blind' along with bleeding eyes, which is always good for a dark poem!
good write methinks. |
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Re: Blind Witness
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:33:27 PM AEST
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| hey, this is amazing... |
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