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In dreams
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:49:40 AM in AEST
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I try to close my eyes again
and still I see them there.
The corpses of the slain
have never rested easy.
I hear them all around
calling out all my names.
I scream for peace
but they won't leave me be.
I feel their flesh against
mine and begin to panic.
I should apologies at
their grinning faces
but the dead can't forgive.
They want my company
for what I had done.
I fight with no real hope
there are too many here.
I awake in a place
that should not be.
A place I used to know.
The barn, the house,
the fields, and trees.
All just as I remember.
Purple sky and three
silver moons should not be.
This place is gone from
so long ago.
My love calls to me again.
She's in the bar waiting.
I don't want to go but must.
I throw open the doors
and am accosted by
a thousand smells I know.
She sings from the loft above.
I see it all again.
The mirror that broke,
the horses kept,
even the six-legged spiders.
She calls again and
I'm in the Sea.
She sings in sirens tune.
She takes my hand smiling
saying be good this time.
A kiss on the cheek goodbye.
Another chance.
A warning.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-03-07 04:49:40]
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Re: In dreams
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 05:47:24 AM AEST
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Cobalt,
Dreams certainly can be more than they say.
I dreams and get more confused everyday
I liked this poem Cobalt.....I could almost understand what it was you were saying...
Well written, tho.....even if I did get lost in the drift of it!
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Re: In dreams
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:13:51 AM AEST
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good write!
i love, yes dreams are soo real, just hang on in there. |
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Re: In dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 01:21:55 PM AEST
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| love the images:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: In dreams
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by Kie on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:51:13 PM AEST
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| Dreams can be quite haunting. Yes sometimes they are more than they seem. Your dream sounds dark and mystical. I enjoyed this poem very much. Kie |
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Re: In dreams
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:09:44 PM AEST
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wow can i say it again wow
you have such a talent wish i had half you write in such a way its like im right there and that just creeps me out
love it love your work
michelle |
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Re: In dreams
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by Remi on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:53:55 AM AEST
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Well that is one powerful dream u had there I can hardly remember my dreams and I can never write them as good as u just did either so good write
remi |
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