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The Outsider's Portrait
Contributed by
ARemoteHeart
on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:43:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She's the face on the canvas
She's a Hollywood tragedy
She's such a beautiful stranger
We call her the "Outsider"
She's an ordinary voice
She has ordinary features
She bleeds like any other
We call her the "Outsider"
She rarely takes advice
She hates conformity
She's still waiting for someone
We call her the "Outsider"
She doesn't like secrets
She's such a hypocrite
She has such a warm smile
We call her the "Outsider"
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ARemoteHeart
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2004-03-07 10:43:49]
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Re: The Outsider's Portrait
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by geoffreyalanbest on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:50:47 AM AEST
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| Great formatting to display a good point. The pointing of reference was will done. One can till that the person who is the subject is the one talking. Isolation in the modern context is important to show and this does that. |
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