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Stranger
Contributed by
mindset
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Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 11:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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walking by no place to smile
in their eyes an unhappy while
looking out to find a place
where to sit and warm the feel
time a pass no change to see
sinking deep no place a real
road now long another crossroad
all to be an empty life shell
night again long set whispers
noone hear to share the hurt
all thats left a lonely word
a strangers thoughts
of past and old....
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mindset
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2004-03-07 11:59:12]
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Re: Stranger
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 12:32:45 PM AEST
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| this is sad... good rhyming scheme though! |
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Re: Stranger
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:24:27 AM AEST
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| Short but deep and sad poem, I feel like I can relate to it. Well done. |
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