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... suicide ...
Contributed by
kinky_154
on
Friday, 13th September 2002 @ 11:04:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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as i lay here, on my bed
crazy thoughts run thru my head
things i've never thought before
like how i wish i was no more
all these thoughts make no sense
i feel so numb, my body tense
if i was gone, who would care?
would anyone contice i wasn't here?
as i lay here, i start crying
feels as tho my soul is dying
i feel so lost and oh so weary
my minds a blur, i can't think clear,t
should i stay? should i go?
so confusing, i just don't know
i can't take this anymore
good bye i say, falling to the floor
as i lay here on the floor
i know i won't hurt anymore
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kinky_154
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2002-09-13 11:04:53]
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Re: ... suicide ...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 09:28:31 AM AEST
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I really don't like this topic , but i've come to realize that by writing your feelings down , even if its in a suicide note , maybe just maybe it will help the person out.
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Re: ... suicide ...
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:05:26 PM AEST
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| I've read alot of your writings, and your such a great writer. But I believe that this is keeping you down. Maybe you should focus on something happy or good and try writing about that. Cuz maybe then your mood will change. |
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