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Give a hug
Contributed by
eugene
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:08:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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please give me a hug
I hear this voice whisper out
That must be whispers from a dying child
Begging mankind to turn her deathly plight
Begging you to lend your crumb of mercy
So her dying world may be turned around.
please give a hug
The pleas keep coming
Who is this crying child?
Could it be the abandoned love
From mans endless wars
Or
The dark clouds swirling
Over the crude hearts of men;
Or
Could it be the baby
Abandoned to rot away
Under the tree of negligence
Planted at the lawns of fate.
please I need your hug
I hear this voice
Across the citys subway
I hear it like a subtle anger
A whisper roaring in my mind
Do you also hear this whisper?
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eugene
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2004-03-08 13:08:42]
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Re: Give a hug
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:12:30 PM AEST
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| this is quite powerful and what i love most about what you write is that it can be interpeted..as i know all to well your gift with words...keep them coming ...slr |
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Re: Give a hug
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:53:50 PM AEST
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Good write... powerful write... it makes one think about how to help those crying out... how to lend a hand... to change it... it must start with the man in the mirror... within yourself!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Give a hug
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:41:22 AM AEST
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| This is mind taking. I will surely give a hug, they need it, I will do what i can. I love this poem and of course this site, I am Dale |
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