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What do you see?
Contributed by
kellros
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:20:10 PM in AEST
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Look deeper into nothing, what do you see?
Can't you see the fine line between maturaty
and everything else they tell you to believe...
isn't it like a bright light shining out of darkness,
a light you follow, but there are no beginings?
A dark cloak is thrown over life,
to dim every single thread of good light...
You see only the bad and accept the worse,
but when last did you choose to see the light and end the verse...
Come to me, ask of me what you will,
in the end it's my choice, to choose... at my will
No forcing required, i'll give you what i want to give you, just don't ask stupid questions, cos in the end you have to live with it....
As snowflakes fall from the leafes of a tree,
something i've never seen, something i might never even see... but i've experienced damp cold air, the vibration of death so disturbing, almost to much for one person to bare
Now shine the light on me, so that i can breathe and live life once more again, clear me of all bad thoughts, make me live by myself again
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Re: What do you see?
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by Kellros on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:45:38 PM AEST
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Nowadays it seems like the only people reading my poem is myself.. i'm not sure what is going on. I'd say allot of prejustice because i'm young, but one thing i surely can tell you... you are full of crap if you think you know and have experienced more than someone younger than you~believe it, because it is life, i'm not sure if it is even worth writing anymore, i know sometimes i post allot of crap, but then there are times that i actually post something worthwhile...
so guess if i don't get a read within 1 day i'm just going to beat it... |
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Re: What do you see?
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by Stitch on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:01:29 PM AEST
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Hello, I'm here. This was a good write. Not only that, it has inspired me. I've wanted to write about maturing, but could never get a handle on how to approach it. I'm going to keep this one in mind as a springboard.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: What do you see?
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:01:21 PM AEST
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| This poem isn't about maturaty, it's about life and people treating you differently, and how to treat life, it's about beginings and ends, seeing the little good in everything bad and making decisions, not about growing up |
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