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You are u in your own special way
Contributed by
luckycharm
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I feel like,
Time is crossing my eyes,
Cause things are not,
The way they,
Used to be,
My mind has lost track,
Of certain things in life,
So I sit and wonder,
What did god,
Make me to be,
I have fear of loosing,
Things that are special,
To me,
And things that I cherish,
For all of my life,
I wake up and I,
Thank god for another,
Day of breathing,
Another day of sunshine,
But most of all life
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luckycharm
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2004-03-08 18:53:35]
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Re: You are u in your own special way
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:03:19 PM AEST
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Good poem , very positive.
Way to go. |
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Re: You are u in your own special way
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by spider on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:13:56 PM AEST
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| at the beginning i thought it was gunna be really quite depressing but the tone changed really nicley. gud to c that sum1 out there can still see the positive side of things - and be able to write well about them! |
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