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Can’t go back
Contributed by
EmersonV
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Starting my efforts I long...
Step by step I lose a breath...
I see my finish line...
Just cant reach it.
I see my starting point...
Cant go back.
Alone in the cold I stand forever...
Losing my grip, losing my mind.
You had my hopes.
You had my dreams.
I guess that wasnt in your view.
Reach for me.
Look for me.
If not...
Just kill me.
Kill the savior.
Kill the saint.
Kill...
Kill...
Dont look back.
I'm alone in my own prison.
Easy crime.
Easy death.
Copyright ©
EmersonV
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2004-03-08 22:40:29]
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Re: Can’t go back
(User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:43:52 PM AEST
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| Wow and cool is all that i can say! |
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Re: Can’t go back
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by Dusty on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:21:53 PM AEST
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I liked all of it, but I loved the darker ending.
~Dusty~ |
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