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Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:51:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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She sits by her window looking over the land, her father, the King promised that one day, the land she overlooks will all be hers. She had always wanted a castle of her own, but she was too young to handle the work that went along with it. She was the only child of the well known King, oh how she wished she had a brother or sister. The Princess had friends, but they lived so very far away, she was lonely gazing out of the castle window all by herself. She had dreams to one day meet a Prince to take her loneliness away. Her father was getting old and wanted to hand the throne down to his only kin. His wife had passed away before her years and he was always heart broken. The King's brother murdered her, he vowed to one day get his revenge. One day, the King decided to roam into town to find his brother, his daughter pleaded with her father not to leave the castle, as she feared for her father's life. The King wanted to make his brother pay for what he had done to his wife. The Princess ran up to her room, sat by the window and cried, she didn't want to lose her father like she lost her mother. As she was wiping the tears from her swollen blue eyes, she saw someone coming up to the castle draw bridge on a beautiful white horse.
Copyright Cynthia Jones Mar.8/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:24:30 PM AEST (User
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oooooooooh I liked this one alot. It is excellent! Kie |
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:24:54 PM AEST (User
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Girl, you are on a roll, don't quit now. More, more,more.
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:55:20 PM AEST (User
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i want mooooooooooore! good job |
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:43:11 AM AEST (User
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this is really good. write more!
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:03:15 PM AEST (User
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ohhh cynthia! wonderful, part two please! dont keep us all hangin' too long now:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:29:47 AM AEST (User
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aaagghh!! the suspense! excellent write im off to read part 2,
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Re: Heir To The Throne (pt.1)
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:28:13 AM AEST (User
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PT1 IS SO PRETTY,I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE SECOND PART!
DAN!! |
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