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Silly Girl, Foolish Girl...
Contributed by
kayald
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So shallow and empty
I hoped there was more
I thought I could help you
But now I dont see what for.
Silly girl, you cant change him
Foolish girl, trying to be nice
Maybe they all are shallow
Why didnt I heed their advice?
What a nice thought,
Try to find their lost souls
Reach out to their hearts
And attempt to mend all their holes
But no, that cannot happen
Their walls are too thick
Hiding their bruised feelings
In barriers stronger than brick.
Silly girl, youre so stupid
Foolish girl, just shut up
They dont care about you
Why dont you just give up?
Theres no point in this nonsense
Why try to make change?
Helping others is something
Too far out of my range.
Now this is over
And you can turn your back on me
I will still try to help you
But just act like you cant see
A silly girl, so foolish
So dumb not to see your ways
Im sorry I got attached
You never wanted me anyway
Silly girl, foolish girl,
Just get out of his way
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-03-08 22:55:05]
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Re: Silly Girl, Foolish Girl...
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by waos on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:03:27 PM AEST
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| hey that was good. i relate to it. if i have the energy i luv to give my attempts at helping ppl or changing them...and i expect it to work...but its often a waste of time. and then its hard to deal with. that was a good read. |
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Re: Silly Girl, Foolish Girl...
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by hidden_dezires on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:17:18 AM AEST
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| i really enjoyed reading this alot..some people have to hit a wall before they get it, they have to learn the hard way...great write..i like the style....hd |
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