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Spiders
Contributed by
stalkee
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Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:03:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This darkness is like a spider,
it has come down on me and caught me
And now it's slowly eating me inside
This is all like some sick dream
Made up in the mind of a strange psycho,
made especially to torture this little boy
There's this dark black flame burning in me,
overtaking the light that once was there
And it's slowly reducing me to nothing...
And there's a long chill running through me...
Everything has been turned to nothing,
and nothing has been turned to everything
I cry out with my silent screams,
cry out to absolutely no one
Only to myself, so I might save myself from myself...
Copyright ©
stalkee
... [
2004-03-08 23:03:12]
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Re: Spiders
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:07:57 PM AEST
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| I feel like this at times stalkee. It's like there's noone there to listen. Nice write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Spiders
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by waos on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:09:10 PM AEST
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| that was really good! i could so feel like it was almost me saying that...it so showed what i feel. and since im absolutely terrified of spiders...having it be the darkness (which i am also afraid of even at the age of 17) totally suits. i could feel the pain inside me when i read it. good work. |
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Re: Spiders
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by Kie on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:31:17 PM AEST
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| This was dark, deep and the last stanza was very powerful. Kie |
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Re: Spiders
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:54:45 AM AEST
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| excellent! i love this poem! youve got it all in here, keep writing! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Spiders
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:59:39 AM AEST
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| Wow...amazing write, great poem you got here. The descriptions capture my whole attention. |
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