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you make me..
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:42:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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you made me cry,
messed around with my head
and told me lies,
told me you like me,
then said goodbye,
now you tell me i make you want to die,
well you already did that to me....
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lostinmyself
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2004-03-09 09:42:26]
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Re: you make me..
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:01:46 AM AEST
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Oh girl, this guy is so messing with your emotions. This is good though. I like the way it twists at the end. You keep writing.
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Re: you make me..
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:37:58 PM AEST
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Very effective for such a short piece PhillyGirl...you said all that needs to be worded. Those two parting lines...*sigh* I have been there...Nice job!
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