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The bleak outlook of depression
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:30:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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black, cold
blind, unfeeling
ancient romance
ended so swiftly
eternal frost
devouring my heart
and I doubt
that any warmth
even friendship
would thaw it
the frozen stone
sitting in my chest
provides no hope,
no bright future
just darkness
this, what I have shown you
is the bleak outlook of depression
and it sucks
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Re: The bleak outlook of depression
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:09:28 PM AEST
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lol, i love those last few lines!! not the way i'd put it, but i hear ya on that one... it usually does suck! good writing! ;0)
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