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Damned Destiny
Contributed by
thumper
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Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 08:45:02 PM in AEST
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Feiry ebon spiraling down
Descending evermore into a flaming chasm
This is the damned destiny
Of my immortal fate and reality
Adrift in absolute solitude
No empathy or emotion
I am......Heart of carbon
Mind of flint
Soul of asbestos
My head races with a plentitude of thoughts
So multitudinous,
I can't think......anymore
Desire to end it all consumes me
Yet, I know it will never cease
I trudge on daily, mechanically doing
Absolutely what I must......sometimes
I can't mentally function any further
And I abhor myself for just that reason
Is it......self-hate?
Depression?
Insanity?
Don't know, and anymore, don't care
I'm married to this life
'Til death do I part.
Copyright ©
thumper
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2004-03-09 20:45:02]
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Re: Damned Destiny
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:07:12 PM AEST
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nice wording. i really liked this. good job keep up the great work.
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Re: Damned Destiny
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:11:50 PM AEST
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this sounds like something my nephew would write... a bit morbid... but a good write... trying thinking upbeat... that's what I have been told... since I sad, sad, emotional stuff lol.
Take care Keep writing...
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Re: Damned Destiny
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:15:36 PM AEST
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| very nicly done. Good use of words. The last line is great. |
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Re: Damned Destiny
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by LiquidChaos on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:48:53 PM AEST
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| Wow. Looks like the poem I wish I could write. Extremely expressive--I can definately identify with this one. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Damned Destiny
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:07:27 AM AEST
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Don't be too hasty to kick off before your time. Life gets better as you age! There is a point you get to that nothing matters but enjoying every day. Hey, anything is possible!
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Re: Damned Destiny
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:41:26 AM AEST
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Agreed .. very good use of words..
"I am......Heart of carbon, Mind of flint
Soul of asbestos, My head races with a plentitude of thoughts..So multitudinous"..
very much captivating..
venkat
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Re: Damned Destiny
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:56:01 AM AEST
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| You know, it's probably a sad thing when you're only just 17 and have days when this poem speaks for you. |
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