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SHORT CIRCUT
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 04:06:55 AM in AEST
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Your a dead wire, can't you see?
There's a short circut tween u-n-me.
Someone's cut our power line
from your heart to mine.
Where is your burning touch
we savoured in so much?
Where did your longing go?
Who destroyed our heavenly flow?
Your soul felt my yearning inside
all my little luv vibes.
Use to your heart did know
when to let luv flow.
Now you get home later each nite.
What is a person suppose to feel? Oh my!
What took your luv from me?
We're alone now, don't cha see?
by
Emy Star
Copyright Emy Star
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-03-10 04:06:55]
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Re: SHORT CIRCUT
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:47:29 AM AEST
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THAT WAS WRITTEN REALLY WELL! HIS LOSS NOT YOURS!! IT ONLY TAKES A
MATTER OF TIME TO START TO SHATTER A HEART!!! HE'LL SEE HIS GREAT LOSS & REGRET IT LATER!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: SHORT CIRCUT
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by hidden_dezires on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:54:29 AM AEST
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| IM LOVIN THIS COS I FEEL YA ON THIS, AND IT FLOWS WELL...I CAN RELATE...I LIKE YOUR STYLE..I SEE THERE IS MUCH I CAN LEARN....HD |
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Re: SHORT CIRCUT
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:17:18 AM AEST
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Loved this, grrlfriend..... too bad..I's sure he regrets it now...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: SHORT CIRCUT
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
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Yep, been there, done that, not fun.
Rita |
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Re: SHORT CIRCUT
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 04:52:45 PM AEST
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| It is his loss for whatever he got couldn't be anywhere near the treasure he had in you. Loved this poem alot Emy. Kie |
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Re: SHORT CIRCUT
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:13:37 PM AEST
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| He lost a gem when he lost you ... a sweet, sincere write ... Jan |
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Re: SHORT CIRCUT
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:05:07 AM AEST
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| Emy, you sound like a sweet, gentle, kind hearted person. Something like this shouldn't happen to you. He's the one that's missing out. *S* Cynthia |
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