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My Heart
Contributed by
jc_92024
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:46:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart bleeds with sadness
As it stains the ground
Its love is nowhere
When I looks around
Its tears of blood
That pours down its side
Its internal sadness
Comes from its inner to outside
Its turns the corner
Waiting to see
Its wanting love
That made it bleed
To bad shes gone
Leaving it to die
All she really did
Was make it bleed and cry
Now it healed
From all its pain
Cause it now accepts
There was nothing to gain
Relief pours over
As the blood dries
My heart grows stronger
From each time it cries
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2004-03-10 12:46:17]
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Re: My Heart
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:46:30 PM AEST
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The last stanza is the best. I have long sought to find the words that capture that experience. You have done so admirably.
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