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Lost Fight... There Were Too Many...

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:26:57 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I stand looking around,
I am stretching out,
Giving un-divided attention.
Screaming now,
Shouting out,
To your faces,
Cut it out!
Feeling pumped,
And out of luck,
trying to move, to find you keep me stuck...
Swearing now, you ********, *******,******
Suck
Trying to fix it clear in your heads,
Trying to control and not see red.
Having them around me, Crowding me, laughing, staring, showing ugly smiles.
Until I rip, and loose my grip,
And so the fight begins,
I absorb, the grins,
And fall as my head spins.
Blood comes, quickly out my skin,
Sudden a mass of breath gets lost within
And lay quite still, as you kick me in the shins,
Then kick me in the ribs, until blood comes out, replacing my sick!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-03-10 13:26:57]
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Re: Lost Fight... There Were Too Many... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:36:13 PM AEST
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Sad. Love the line about "absorbing the grins."
Stitch

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