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ashes ashes
Contributed by
merry
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:19:20 PM in AEST
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pain endeavors to consume
burning up celluloid dreams
pasted behind tired eyes
as reminders of yesterday
and the timeless floating
downstream that never ends
until breathing stops all together
smokey funeral pyre
unnoticed by the many
mourned by the few
ashes, ashes we all fall down
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-03-10 14:19:20]
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Re: ashes ashes
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:26:32 PM AEST
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Some hurts are so deep they feel like they will never heal. I could feel this. I have lived this. Are you sure you aren't me? LOL!
Stitch |
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Re: ashes ashes
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:27:15 PM AEST
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I feel the pain in this....the sad resignation. (((((((((((Gaille))))))))
I'm here for ya
Roses for a wilted daisy
Larry |
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Re: ashes ashes
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by Kellros on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:35:34 PM AEST
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ashes to ashes...
dust to dust...
let us live our lives purposefully, to a point, where we rust :P
Goody :) nice poem, i liked it allot, death is common, till you experience yourself and through your eyes, well yeah, i'd say more, but i talk to much and tend to spam,
anyways :) thanks |
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Re: ashes ashes
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:35:49 PM AEST
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beautifully sad......... (((((gaille))))) always here for you, love daisy*ness
@->>->- |
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Re: ashes ashes
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:58:29 PM AEST
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| Get it out from your soul you will feel better for it when all is in the open. Good strong poem I liked it bernard. |
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Re: ashes ashes
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:07:45 PM AEST
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| ((((Gaille)))) I know how you feel, and the tiredness eats away at you ... hang in there ... a strong write ... hugs Jan |
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