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I said so
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:50:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I said so
Take it leave now maybe make it, to late you hesitated
Wont go I forsake it, Not now I will break it
Your face mutilated, cant tell if your related
Your lifes dedicated, to death so long you waited
A knife inspirated, to kill all that betrayed it
Last breath resuscitated, brought back to the life you hated
Your fates recreated, But your faith was desocrated
Lost hope and all forgiveness
Cant cope with how we live this
Want more but we cant get it
What for just to regret it
My life is not your buisness
Your knife I know it did this
My mind was changed that instant
Next time I wont forget it
Lost faith Im so defenseless
My ways are now relentless
No name I cant attempt it
No fame has been accepted
My life has been respectless
I thrive just to defend us
My mind has been infected
Im blind its self inflicted
PAIN IS PUNISHMENT
I SHALL STAB MYSELF
PAIN IS PUNISHMENT
I CANT TELL MYSELF
PAIN IS PUNISHMENT
I CAN HAVE MYSELF
PAIN IS PUNISHMENT
AND I CANT HELP MYSELF
Mixed mind and mixed emotions
My minds on drugs and potions
I find Im having notions
To fing if theres corrosion
Inside I feel devotion
Outside I dont know him
My pride I could show him
I lied I dont owe him
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2004-03-10 14:50:58]
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Re: I said so
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by kailadragon on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:24:05 PM AEST
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powerful words...powerful poem.....great write
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Re: I said so
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:01:38 PM AEST
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This is very good. I've probably said this to a million of your new poems... but I think this one is my favorite this far. Man, you gotta stop getting better with every poem, I don't think I can catch up!!
*J*
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