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The Vex of Her
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:23:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I hit the point that one evening The windows were painted black As to shut light away from my eyes And to help me not to turn back I sat rigidly on the hearth Eyes shut but mind bleeding open The torrent of thoughts spun wildly And one made it seem broken
"Her" - I thought to myself "Her" - I needed some help "She" - Should be dead in me Yet, "She" - Festered like a disease
Then an idea formed in me Standing still amongst the twitches I could remove what was reminiscent And then sew up the stitches I opened my eyes and saw the bed Where we had once laid And then everything else just seemed To form a cascade Of lost joy and hope The things you used to symbolize The longer I peered at my abode The more I realized That everything was tainted All was to be spurned The ash fell onto my back As my home was vehemently burned A moment fo placidity died When I felt you on my skin My mind struck cold You were still alive within
GOD! IS THERE NO ESCAPE? ARE YOU A PERMANENT CURSE? IT THOUGHT IT'D BE OVER WHEN I LAID YOU IN THE HEARSE BUT STILL YOU'RE HAUNTING ME YOU JUST WON'T LEAVE ME BE SO NOW I'M AGES PAST THE POINT OF INSANITY THERE! I FELT IT AGAIN YOU CRAWLING UNDER MY SKIN I TRIED TO STAY CALM BUT THERE'S NO PEACE - ONLY SIN ROLLING IN MY HEAD FROM A DEVIL'S HYMN NOW MY VISION'S BLURRY FROM THE KNOWLEDGE OF WHAT HAD BEEN
I couldn't feel the flames As they burned me alive I only knew that is was killing Her as well inside But as I shoved my face Deeper into the pain Somehow she escaped And an angel she became
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Re: The Vex of Her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crimson_Rose on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:09:42 PM AEST (User
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Awesome, Powerfu limagery...I like this! Great write! |
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Re: The Vex of Her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:24:02 AM AEST (User
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This girl must have really gotten under your skin, huh? Whatever the case, she inspired you to write a really kick-ass, intense poem here. More power to ya. |
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