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Tears of yesterday
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:34:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Only time knows the tears i've cried
for yesterdays and hurting tomorrows.
Papers line my floor carrying thoughts
humans are strangers to.
I should of turned towards my window
to seek the sun i rarely know,
but my visions kept me safe
as i locked my world away.
Wondering why i held the gun
haunts my tranquile dreams,
unanswered questions follow like my shadow,
sending its fear to my eyes.
Screams of yerterdays carry through the night,
hoping to find the heart i need.
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gery_giggles
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2004-03-10 20:34:33]
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Re: Tears of yesterday
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:57:25 PM AEST
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| Very good word usage, I must say. Excellent piece. |
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Re: Tears of yesterday
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:06:13 AM AEST
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Nice and intens poem. Hope you find what you are looking for.
Hur |
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Re: Tears of yesterday
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:57:48 PM AEST
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| Excellent write gery. People should express their emotions on paper, instead of holding them in. You did a great job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Tears of yesterday
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by Alisteal_Rayne on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:38:21 PM AEST
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| very very good :) I loved it, very intense and catches your attention |
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