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Anymore
Contributed by
booboo
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:49:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i was so happy to be with you
now i'm lost and don't know what to do
i have absalutely no clue
who are you?who am i?
look me in the eye
let me say good-bye
there is nothing i can do anymore
there was nothing i could do before
you always ran me to the floor
now all i can think about is the gore
i know nothing for sure
there is no cure
i don't think i deserve this
move right over
get out of my way
today is the day
it should be over
there is nothing i can do anymore
there was nothing i could do before
you always ran me to the floor
now all i can think about is the gore
see ya in the future
have no cure
nothing is for sure
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booboo
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2004-03-10 20:49:48]
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Re: Anymore
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:05:05 PM AEST
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Nice write.
Whisper
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Re: Anymore
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:05:34 PM AEST
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| Aye, a comment. It really doesn't seem like anyone comments on poems that much at all... Anyway, your poem has a rather catchy flow to it, albeit a bit raw. Good write. |
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