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Drowning Wound
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lost it If ever really there Gone Washed out Dirty Not clean of it The blood stain None see In plain sight Written all over face None read Short mourning By few others Then moved on A sharp cruelty Not spared From this time A stab Gutting the yet open wound Life pouring out Spilling to drown Where lieing
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Re: Drowning Wound
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:07:09 PM AEST (User
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I love your ideas in this... reminded me of a lot of things, interesting write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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