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What you did
Contributed by
lostlove
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My life is in shambles
I cant feel
Feel what I used to
You made me
And you broke me
My life used to be great
Now I cant even see
Why you did this
I will never know
All I hope for
In this hell
Hell I call life
Is for you to understand
Understand what you did
You destroyed everything
My love doesnt exist
I dont even know
Know what love is
The only thing I know
Know is hate
Just go and die
So I can move on
And feel better about life
For I love you
Love you more than I
I can understand
Come back to me
I am in the dark
Copyright ©
lostlove
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2004-03-11 10:06:27]
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Re: What you did
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:22:28 AM AEST
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This reminds me o something I would write...
I can hear echoes of emotion and pain... felt somewhere deep inside... that are wanting to surface and yet at the same time wanting to run, wanting to hide...
Good write...
~Donna~ |
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Re: What you did
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:40:30 AM AEST
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| beautiful expression of feelings on and of human nature and i love your ending too, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: What you did
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:48:30 AM AEST
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Anger, pain and a deep longing.....great emotional write.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: What you did
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by Saitou-sama on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:54:56 PM AEST
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| You can feel the ardor, and the itch, to be wanted. Great job. |
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