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The First... Last Kiss
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:17:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our lips brush in the passing moment...
Only to meet again... as our souls embrace within
A spark ignites into a liquid fire of passion...
As a passionate kiss ensues
And our hearts feel the burning renewed
The longing for another kiss... that can no longer wait
As the passion rises from somewhere deep within
Our lips meet...
Our hearts embrace...
Our souls entwine...
As the passion that was poured out and ignited now subsides
It was over and done with in less than a heartbeat... quickly... in the blink of an eye
As the passionate taste of the lingering effects
Echoes on and on through our minds
Dreaming of when our lips shall meet again
Somehow... someway... someday...
To carry us on love's wings
As did that first... last kiss of yesterday
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2004-03-11 11:17:00]
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Re: The First... Last Kiss
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:30:58 AM AEST
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Wow and wow......this is poetry at its finest.
Just beautifully written and oh so tender.
Roses at your feet for this one
Larry :o) |
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Re: The First... Last Kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:36:59 AM AEST
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exquisite poem, breathtakingly beautiful, keep writing!! hugs n' love nessa
@->>-
your note made me smile: *remember ur first kiss and how u thought it would be ur last?* umm no- i try to forget; couldnt wait til that one was over lol
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Re: The First... Last Kiss
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:41:52 AM AEST
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i can't wait to get my kiss next week^_^..this was a good poem...i likes alot.^_^
luv always |
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Re: The First... Last Kiss
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by Twitch06 on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:20:09 AM AEST
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i can totally relate to ur poem. I have been there before. and then i never got to feel the persons lips again :(.
ANYWAYS...... great poem, i really enjoyed it. gl with ur future writes.
~Kristen |
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Re: The First... Last Kiss
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by markie on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 07:58:10 AM AEST
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Loved the poem, but it made me cry...just had a good-bye kiss...the really bad one...
what a writer you are. @};- on yahoo mssngr...that would be a rose.... |
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