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Trust#2
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Life is like a grain of sand,
traveling the ocean with out making a sound.
praying to reach solid ground, finnaly sticking to dry land.
the journey was not and easy one but
i must say, it was a lot of fun.
to see an feel the hot day sun, i hope to stick to no one.
because i like were i'm at,on dry land you take that.
wet ,cool and dry,no one is moving this love child.
i trust you to take care of me,as we travel the world oceans
we are free.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-03-11 15:26:02]
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Re: Trust#2
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by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:28:18 PM AEST
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ooo, love the imagery in this... *sigh* ,,, i miss the ocean! lol, great write!! ;0)
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Re: Trust#2
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:07:43 PM AEST
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dearest richard, this is so beautiful! your poetry just gets better and better! cant wait for the next one! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Trust#2
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by Putteragain on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 01:06:05 PM AEST
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this made me feel calm love it very visual
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