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How Am I Doing?
Contributed by
MisterRight
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Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 08:26:38 PM in AEST
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Dont ask me how I am doing.
What do you expect me to say?
Should I tell you that Im miserable?
Or should I lie and say Im okay?
I cant answer that question.
I dont want pity I want you.
Do you really want to hear,
My life is empty and days are blue?
How am I doing?
Should I give my reply?
I miss you more and more,
As each moment passes by.
I could tell you Im over you,
But please dont ask for proof.
Every day I hurt more.
I still love you, is the truth.
I cant tell you things are better.
That Im happy or getting by.
Honestly, Im scared and lonely.
Every night, I still cry.
How am I doing?
My life, the definition of hell.
Ive locked myself away.
My memories, my cell.
I could tell you Ive found someone.
But that would be another lie.
I know you dont want to hear,
Some nights I pray to die.
My dreams have faded.
My goals are shattered.
My future frightens me.
You were all that mattered.
How am I doing?
I get worse every day.
Ive lost my reason for being.
So, what should I say?
Im trapped by a love,
I refuse to let go.
How am I doing?
Did you really want to know?
Fun is a memory.
Dreams, a thing of the past.
Love thats one sided.
Hopes all that lasts.
How am I doing,
Since youve been away?
What can I tell you?
I guess Im okay.
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MisterRight
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Re: How Am I Doing?
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 08:33:14 PM AEST
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Well said. I agree that some questions are better left unasked. Touching poem.
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Re: How Am I Doing?
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by Lia on
Sunday, 15th September 2002 @ 02:12:57 AM AEST
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| How are you doing?? Well you are doing just fine :) |
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Re: How Am I Doing?
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 01:14:40 PM AEST
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| You're doing better since August though!!! I think... ;) It'll get better with time... but this poem does a REALLY great job of portraying all the thoughts that go through your head the instant that the question is asked... until you say... fine, ok, good, I'm here... etc... Great write Curtis... and the pain gets easier.. just takes a little while. |
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