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Untitled
Contributed by
monkey
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:41:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I walk down the road
wondering
trying to get there
I walk down the road
wondering
where 'there' is
I walk down the road
wondering
if I will ever find 'there'
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monkey
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2004-03-11 23:41:25]
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:12:34 PM AEST
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| interesting write. not very complex though. could use more substance and a title. i think i wrote a poem, oblivion, kind of like this. i loved it when i wrote it and then now i think its the most horrible write ive ever written. i think your friend has some talent though. you should tell your friend to be a member =] |
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