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The Hunter and the Prey
Contributed by
lostlove
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Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:34:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Hey mister big stuff
I am over here
Am I the one you seek
Am I the one you need
Must you feel better
Better about yourself
Then please criticize
For I do not care
I do not prey
Prey on others imperfections
For I am bigger than you
Than you will ever be
So go on and criticize
For I will still stay here
And remain stronger
Than you will ever be
Copyright ©
lostlove
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2004-03-12 12:34:14]
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Re: The Hunter and the Prey
(User Rating: 1 )
by Avis_Nigra on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:33:41 PM AEST
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| I like it, but the title is somewhat misleading - if you had called it something like "the critic" you might have made people find what they seek (ok, I have critizised you now... I hope that does not make me a worse person *winks* ) |
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