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I Light You LikeFireworks!
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 06:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hello little humans!
Why do you shrink away,
when I come to play?
I rise into the sky,
on black wings so silky,
and spot my next playmate.
I corner you and play tricks with your mind,
My body hides a disturbed soul,
as I think of what game to play.
I know just what to do!
We go to a special place,
were the game begins.
I light your hair on fire,
I watch you burn,
waiting for it to reach the TNT
strapped to you feet.
I hear your screams,
I laugh and dance and frolic
as you burn like a fuse.
KABOOM!
Hahahahaha!!!!!
I watch you fly up in the sky,
like a giant display of fireworks,
most of them spraying red.
I twirl as the pieces of your body
rain down.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-03-12 18:30:32]
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Re: I Light You LikeFireworks!
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST
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Good flowing write, liked it from the start to the end.
Not quite gory enough, but the imagary is there all the same.
Keep it up I like your style. |
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Re: I Light You LikeFireworks!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 08:42:35 PM AEST
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| terrific write loved it.. I've read it three times already lol ...keep up the wonderful work..Love AnGel |
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Re: I Light You LikeFireworks!
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by TwEeK on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:29:47 PM AEST
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AYECARUMBA!
thats gory aint it eh?
not a dark poem more like a psycotic poem.
Good wright all the same though, kinda funny in a way? :o) |
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