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How can you tell me?
Contributed by
monica109
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Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 10:37:52 PM in AEST
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Here now in depths of a world, silence broken
I await your precious smile, sweet token
But all I'll ever get is the essence still angry
And now all I see are powers meant to be.
Chorus:
How can you tell me I'm wrong,
With my head forced down,
By the silent crowd.
How can you tell me I'm wrong,
When I made you
When I made you.
How can you tell me I'm wrong,
When I gave up
From the pressure that won't rise up
How can you tell me I'm wrong,
Eyes poured by the hate,
You forced me to make.
Drank by you
Only for you.
Now I see your walkin away
You tried so hard to have somethin real to say
But how do you expect me to feel?
And how the hell am I supposed to deal.
Chorus 1x
Why are you even botherin leaving?
You spent you whole life
Always decievin.
Why even bother tellin me to go to hell?
When you showed me the way right back,
You gave me the trail
Repeat Chorus till end
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Re: How can you tell me?
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by RochelleLloyd on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 10:51:12 PM AEST
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| This is good. Do you have a melody? |
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Re: How can you tell me?
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by monica109 on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 10:52:47 PM AEST
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| sure do and the sheet music if i can get it signed anywhere lol |
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Re: How can you tell me?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 11:28:46 PM AEST
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Song lyrics don't usually make much sense to me without the melody in the background. But I like what this is saying. I have lived what this is saying so maybe that is why it does make sense. You have definite talent.
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Re: How can you tell me?
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by monica109 on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 11:32:50 PM AEST
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| Maybe it is because I'm the author but i think there is a real sense of power behind these words |
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Re: How can you tell me?
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by poetporshaye on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 11:34:16 PM AEST
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| I really liked it. Since I love to sing I added my own melody to it. But the words to it were great. |
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