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Forbidden Love
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:09:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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As each passing day moves on,
Our love for each other grows strong,
Through our intamit passion in the yard,
Holding our love from sight is hard,
Both our parents don' t belive,
For the love we both concive,
Yet no one will ever know,
The secret that we hold.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-03-13 00:09:11]
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:19:19 AM AEST
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Neat poem... it flows... I like it... keep writing...
It's okay that it's short...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:28:02 AM AEST
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Length doesn't matter. Content does and you managed to fit a lot of feeling in a few words. You did great. Keep writing.
Rita |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by New_York_Chick on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:29:02 PM AEST
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it might be short, but it in no way reflects how good it is
really sweet, loving poem |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Dany on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:29:19 PM AEST
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| hey how ya doin. great job, and keep writing anyway you feel. if anyone doesn't like it its ok cause the people above an me do! |
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