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Bearer of Pain
Contributed by
blueheart
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Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:43:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Bearer of pain,
Intruding into our lives again,
Resurfacing the anger and shame.
Screaming at us your spiteful words,
Slashing our lives with violent spurts,
Destroying our humanity with the grief you hurl.
Bearer of pain,
Our faces have these constant tear stains,
From our torment what do you gain?
The exhaustion sets in after daily fights,
A surge of frustration from this luclkess plight,
It's time to give up because we've tried.
Bearer of pain,
Our sanity has crumbled it wont be the same,
I wish you left and never came.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2004-03-13 02:43:37]
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:50:06 AM AEST
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| ohhh hanna, big hugs! this is so well expressed, i hope everything is alright, im here if you want to talk:) love nessa |
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:56:24 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by Kie on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:27:05 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem. The bearer of pain, I wish would just pass me on by! You said it perfectly in this poem. Kie |
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by AliB on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 03:16:46 PM AEST
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I can feel the pain in this poem, can kind of relate. Very well put together, hope you are ok.
Ali xx |
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:52:51 AM AEST
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| Superb piece, your pain is described very well and I feel you. Kudos to ya. |
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:03:50 PM AEST
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Love it. Your writing is the kind I always search for. I like a taste of everything. I dont get the taste of this type of writing as I often would like to.
Exellent write.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by arden on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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oh i like this one alot! wow really awesome. good work.
Arden |
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:24:41 PM AEST
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wow Hanna this is amazing.. i love it.. i don't know why i havent been keeping up with your writes.. i've definitely been missing out! keep it up :)
charlotte x_x_x
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Re: Bearer of Pain
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:59:32 AM AEST
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| In case you were wondering this one is about my grandmother. |
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