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*!* Your Smile *!*
Contributed by
justjames
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Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 03:11:56 PM in AEST
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Youre beautiful,
Youre amazing,
Youre the most wonderful person in the world,
Ill see you in the hall tomorrow,
And ill wink at you,
And youll give that cute little smile that i love,
And made me fall for you in the first place,
Youll have no idea,
Just how i feel,
You think i just like you,
But its much more than that,
But...
Youll never know,
Just how i feel,
I have no chance with you,
Youre just too amazing,
Youre just too beautiful,
Youre the most wonderful person in the world,
And i dont deserve someone like you.
That smile i get,
Is all i have,
But its enough,
Thats all i need,
To know youre there,
And you notice me.
Your smile.
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justjames
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2004-03-13 15:11:56]
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
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by Steb3544 on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 04:06:04 PM AEST
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give it time...
they'll notice you..:)
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:01:40 PM AEST
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| wow great write give it time she'll come around .........Love AnGel......... |
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
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by 6_2 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:47:44 AM AEST
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This is like the most amazing thing I have ever read!!!! I would go crazy if a guy wrote something like this for me. Did you show this to the girl? If you did, She would probably fall in love with you, just from this!
I hope to read more amazing pieces from you!!!!!!!! |
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:01:26 AM AEST
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| this is an awesome poem!!!!!!!!! how did u ever come up with this?? it's great!!!!! |
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 09:46:54 AM AEST
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| wow, thank you all for commenting on my poems! i really didnt think they were all that great, i guess i just have good inspiration |
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