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this time
Contributed by
damned
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Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 04:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Watch for the sand drizzle down, take a good look around, do u see time, do u feel the rhyme, as the hair grows white, u know ur goin into flight, stop runnin, sumthin is happenin, see the grave, life u crave, its all gone, in alcohol u drown, uve been a clown, in this dark town, people aint there, they dont care, get the shivers, start the quivers, its damn cold, all u need is a hand to hold, reaching out for it, this place is a , now ur falling, u hear ur name calling, down in the abyss, what is this, must be dreamin, my eyez start flaring, ur heart stops beating, ur knife starts cutting, ur throat is bleeding
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Re: this time
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 05:05:18 PM AEST
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Oooooh! LOVE the flow of this. Dark , powerful, and at the same time crying out. Anxious to see what more you have to share with us.
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Re: this time
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by Remi on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 05:52:02 PM AEST
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| I love the description u have for this poem it very dark but is a great write |
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