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The Warmth of the Sun
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 07:32:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The sun is shining
The sky is beautiful to behold
But for me its raining
And unbearably cold
When will the clouds break?
When will the sky turn blue?
How much more can I take?
When will the storm be through?
I want to feel the sun
Feel the warmth upon my face
For the storm to be done
Clear skies to take its place
Once I knew brightness
I even knew purity
Around me was calmness
A feeling of security
That time is long since past
The memory feels as a dream
The distance grows vast
As I visit the opposite extreme
Between is revealed
A void that divides
All crossings concealed
Where darkness presides
Across the void
Where innocence exists
Hope is enjoyed
And brightness persists
From innocence Ive parted,
In remorse I now lay
Across the void uncharted
I must find a way
Will there be peace or dismay?
A chance or none,
Of the storm clearing away?
Feeling the warmth of the sun?
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ToriVeigh
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2004-03-13 19:32:57]
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Re: The Warmth of the Sun
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by Pompous on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:43:45 AM AEST
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| I love this poem...very descriptive and i love the rhyming pattern, it was perfect...well done |
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Re: The Warmth of the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:11:31 AM AEST
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I like this poem and printed it out. You weave the analogies and metaphors in and out beautifully.
Advice:
You are too into yourself. You wallow in despair and use it as a cover to hide.
Life goes on and like the weather is full of changes. If the sun is out and you can't enjoy the warmth and be happy to be alive and count your blessings, then you missed the boat. Get out of yourself. Help others and take the focus off of you. You'll feel the warmth of a 1000 suns then.
The sun is always shining somewhere, even if it's above the clouds. You just have to learn patience.
Deal with the ghosts and get on with your life.
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