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Are you scared Yet?
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 11:02:19 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Pure Red wine,
the taste is so sweet,
much like the blood dripping
from my knife.
Icy colors fill my eyes,
and i lurk in darkness
throughout the cold night.
You cant see me but there
i stand, over your body on the floor,
cold and dead.
I mimick your last words, before you
fell to the floor,
"Youll never forget, Just becuase im dead!"
Awww, to bad, ill find
someone else.
For now you can feel
me standding behind you,
the feeling on your neck
of my minty ice breath.
Are you Scared yet?
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srugglingyoungster
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2004-03-13 23:02:19]
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Re: Are you scared Yet?
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by ml03 on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:43:22 AM AEST
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| i like it, its dark and sassy, luv'd it |
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Re: Are you scared Yet?
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:28:04 AM AEST
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HMMM ITS DIFFERENT I KINDA LIKE IT.
I GUESS WE ARE ALL KINDA DIFFERENT. |
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Re: Are you scared Yet?
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:12:04 PM AEST
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i like this one. you have a real talent.
i like where it say "icy colours fill my eyes", that well thought up, well, to me any way! |
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Re: Are you scared Yet?
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:41:30 PM AEST
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I like your comment at the beginning. Although I feel that it must seem to someone who reads the comments that I post that I am always saying that I like the poem, I'd like to explain myself here:
I do like this poem, I do like the others I've read. I can't say that I don't like someone's poem, for it's their art. It's not for me to like, it's for the artists to express themselves. All I can do is offer what I think about the poem and I think controversy is a load of bull that the stupid society builds up.
What I think about this poem is that it's well written and that means I like it. So there. Hahaha.
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