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Broken
Contributed by
BrokenHeartedLass
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:40:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A broken life,
full of broken dreams,
A newly broken heart,
ripped at the seams.
So many broken nights,
so cold and alone,
I'd die for a chance
to just talk on the phone.
I need some type of love,
something to come help me,
mold the broken pieces
into something I want to be.
A fragment of my heart,
left lying on the floor,
reminds me that I'm broken
and can be nothing more.
Copyright ©
BrokenHeartedLass
... [
2004-03-14 02:40:23]
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Re: Broken
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:05:08 AM AEST
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| Man i have felt like this before....such a good write! |
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Re: Broken
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by Dina on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:41:48 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel, it is really true. |
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Re: Broken
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by lostinlimbo on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:24:11 AM AEST
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| I'm here to say you can be something more. We write very similar.. it's uncanny. I love your work, I only hope I am privaledged to read and comment on more. |
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Re: Broken
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:19:25 PM AEST
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| very good poem! i hope writing helps you overcome your feelings a little! |
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Re: Broken
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:35:21 PM AEST
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| Broken and alone you are surely not, your words have touched this empty spot. You write so very well. Thank you. |
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