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Hollow
Contributed by
trustedeyes2000
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 05:03:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The chocolate bunny is hollow
nothing inside
body frame instead
but nothing inside.
My body makeover
nothing inside
use to be
now it has gone bye.
something special there
but now needs to hide
now hollow
now hollow
inside.
cant be oneself
old has past away
new come again
this here new day.
hollow
needing to be feeled
for new love
that is real
new love
but not forgotten
the old love
just needed to be replaced
hollow
do i really want to be
yes, now see the new me.
what do you see.
for me
nothing.
jmmo.
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2004-03-14 17:03:56]
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Re: Hollow
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 05:10:30 PM AEST
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