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CHANGE
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 05:34:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I STAND ALONE-
ANGRY-
SCREAMING AT AN UNCHANGEABLE WORLD
UNCHANGEABLE FEELINGS
RUNNING THROUGH THIS BROKEN HEART-CUTTING MYSELF ON THE JAGGED EDGES-
COULD YOU HAVE NOT CHANGED THE END RESULT-
RESULTS UNCHANGEABLE
MY LOVE UNCHANGEABLE-
AND THE LACK OF YOURS THE SAME
COULD I NO LONGER FEEL-
I DON"T WANT TO.
RAGE POURS FROM MY VEINS
AS THIS POISONED LOVE GOES UP IN FLAMES
.......................UNCHANGED
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
... [
2004-03-14 17:34:22]
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Re: CHANGE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:59:28 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem and the title alot. The only thing I didn't like so much was that it was written all in caps and it seemed like screaming and it took away from the read. Other than that I thought it was perfect. Kie |
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