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The big dream of suicide
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:57:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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she's lost in a maze,
a vitreous torture chamber.
with thoughts
pounding
- in her head.
playing,
with the dream
of suicide
everybody looks
- point fingers,
at her slow
self-mutilation.
holds their breath,
gasp for words,
stare quietly.
she's trapped
in a body,
which aches
for a peaceful
grave.
a soul that cries
"I'm unworthy
to save!"
she's unwillingly breathing
falling
into herself
in danger of death
blinded by
hate
mouthing the words,
by the inquisitive
strangers.
they stare
she sleeps.
and forever holds her breath
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2004-03-14 20:57:09]
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Re: The big dream of suicide
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:04:18 PM AEST
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tHIS IS VERY, VERY SAD BUT U GET YOUR POINT ACCROSS WELL.
LUV, HUGGS,
EMY |
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Re: The big dream of suicide
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by Pompous on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:15:31 PM AEST
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| awesome poem, very descriptive and can relate to it |
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Re: The big dream of suicide
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:22:52 PM AEST
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| Very Sad but yet great write......Love.......AnGel |
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Re: The big dream of suicide
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by Pwei on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:13:41 PM AEST
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Hi there, I like your stuff. Its amazing that English is your 2nd language. I am in awe!
This one is my favourite. It is powerful and lets the reader know exactly where the girl's mind is at and how trapped she feels.
Hugs and purple glitter
MARK |
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