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Shower Time
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:31:36 AM in AEST
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Your preaching is like that of Hitlers speeches from that magnificent pedestal
If I am not like you condemn me to hell
In the gas chambers you watch us asphyxiate
Your standards we will never live up to
You desire clones, thinking, acting even looking like you
If we do not its a world wide genocide
How many have been taken in by your propaganda?
How many more must you take
Enslaving, brain washing, forcing them to dig their own grave
Of ignorance and trepidation
Guards standing above them
Pushing them into the grave if they make one blunder
Who will rise above this brutal tyrant
Before the entire world is either killing or being killed
At what time will you see that youre not helping us survive
That youre turning the gas on in the chambers
Deceiving us
Making us believe its a shower to make us uncontaminated
When in reality it stripes us of our lives
You force those that are diverse into a camp
All the same all brainless all blind that is how you see them
Not worth the air they use up
You walk around with your nose in the air
I dont know if you even see what you are doing
Or if you mean to kill all of us
You preach peace and love
But the only ones that deserve it are the ones like you
Blonde hair and blue eyes
Or religious and prefect
I am not one of you
I got liberated from the camp
I am free
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lil_angel
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Re: Shower Time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:38:07 AM AEST
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| Wow most powerful poem good job. |
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Re: Shower Time
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by jbrow on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:50:43 AM AEST
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This one was very good, and very deep. we need more writers like you that take I good long look at the past. To make a better, and more brigtter tomorrow, I love all, of your work, so keep up the good work
P's
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Re: Shower Time
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:44:18 AM AEST
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| That was a powerful, well-written write. The last verse wraps up the poem very nicely and is the most powerful to me. You rule :) |
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Re: Shower Time
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by rhymeandreason on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:38:38 PM AEST
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| Well done. Powerful, evocative of the dark side of power and where it takes us all when lie and deciet ascend to the seat of truth. Which can only happen when what is true has no voice willing to speak it.When liars and decievers walk into truths temple and no alarm is raised, we're all in for a sad sick ride to those places we would never want to go to.On target. Keep at it. |
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Re: Shower Time
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:49:04 AM AEST
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You've created a masterpeice here.
It's sad but then the hole thought of Hitler is sad. My late grandfather fleed to the United States and was spared.
Great job and I agree very powerfull.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Shower Time
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 08:58:06 PM AEST
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CeCe...
This is a very potent and powerful poem... I like this. It's got a good message, and I'm glad that your liberated. It's like you tried to obtain that all your life. Your a much stronger person than I pretend to be. I'm sorry if I ever contributed to your oppression. Truly.
Jaime |
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Re: Shower Time
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:18:41 PM AEST
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| Wow |
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